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This light upon my shudders
Reflects
And blinds my eyes
As I wake.
Not unlike you,
Don’t you agree?
You appeared suddenly,
And all else seemed
To emulate the light you shined
My eyes were blinded by the light-
And fluttered open in surprise.
To follow in such a lights bright wake
Would truly lead to my demise.
My heart did flutter
As I followed
But what I didn’t know-
Was that I had opened your eyes as well
But you were subtle in your love
I didn’t realize until later
Just how much we adored each other.
But for now I admire at a distance
And even not so far as such
And as I warm my heart in your light-
As I open the shutters wider.
The sun does shine ever brighter
But I defy the sun’s own light-
Because compared, it does ours no right.
©2008-2009 ~Escapetomymind
:iconescapetomymind:

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THIS IS NOT BASED OFF OFF TWILIGHT, OR NEW MOON OR ECLIPSE!!!

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:icondarkjem:
... Hmmm. Seemed kinda rambley to me... not nessicarily a bad thing but it drags slightly, don't you think?

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Thank you.

You're welcome.

Wow... those aren't hard to type at all!
:iconescapetomymind:
hmm, i dont really think so, maybe a little at the end, but i didnt thin it was so bad. a bit mushier than the norm, but i thought it was ok. would you elaborate?

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Me: Dad, where do babies come from?
Dad: Well, we got you at wall mart, your brother at target...
Me: HUH?!
Dad: What? It was a blue light special.
Me: You got me ON SALE?!
Mom:That explains a lot, we got your sister at Best buy.
:icondarkjem:
Well my big problem with it is the word "light" I think there could be a better word used a few times... might make things more interesting?

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Please?

Thank you.

You're welcome.

Wow... those aren't hard to type at all!
:iconescapetomymind:
hmm, i think you may be right.
lol, i am always coming up short on these things.i will try to alter and improve.

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Me: Dad, where do babies come from?
Dad: Well, we got you at wall mart, your brother at target...
Me: HUH?!
Dad: What? It was a blue light special.
Me: You got me ON SALE?!
Mom:That explains a lot, we got your sister at Best buy.
:icondarkjem:
Good plan.

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Please?

Thank you.

You're welcome.

Wow... those aren't hard to type at all!
:iconoberin:
the use of light makes me think that someone is trying to escape a darkness, be it part of their soul or just a location.

it's almost a tale of falling in love and being awoken to the deeper emotions.

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:ahoy:

I'll try being nicer if you try being smarter...

This is a profound statement! Marvel at it's profoundness!
:iconescapetomymind:
yes! that is it almost exactly!
Its about first love, and that before you meet someone that you can love you feel complete in yourself, but then you find that someone, and a whole new side of you comes out, and wants to be better for that person.

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Me: Dad, where do babies come from?
Dad: Well, we got you at wall mart, your brother at target...
Me: HUH?!
Dad: What? It was a blue light special.
Me: You got me ON SALE?!
Mom:That explains a lot, we got your sister at Best buy.
:iconoberin:
*nodnod*
it is beautiful when another side of yourself is presented like that.

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:ahoy:

I'll try being nicer if you try being smarter...

This is a profound statement! Marvel at it's profoundness!
:iconmizukiisme:
wow, nice imagry!

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Donnie: My parents didn't get me what I wanted for Christmas.
Lilian Thurman: What did you want?
Donnie: Hungry Hungry Hippos.
Lilian Thurman: And how did you feel, being denied these hungry, hungry hippos?
Donnie: Regret.


Donnie Darko FTW

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